New page from the E epic is up! Not my favorite page, doesn't have much flow and some of the drawing is kinda wonky, but it moves the story along. If you want to see the whole stinkin' story up to now in order, you can find it here
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Hey! I think it looks good! Tantalizing page! Just as promised. Necessary "talking heads" conversing page, maybe (I hate talking them down because I have no problem with them, think they're pretty often integral to getting the meat of the story and I want that, too; and think they're usually cool and interesting if the artist is good, and yours is), but you've made it interesting and it has some nice touches and moves along nicely. Has a nice little page turner panel at the end and sets up the segue into the next page wonderfully. I like the middle widescreen panel a lot.
Nice work, man!
The story has started pretty explosive and splashy, which I love, but I actually think the pacing toward this page has worked well. And as it goes, probably having more conversive pages will work out and in balancing and bringing more punch to the pacing here and there with the different intesities as a whole. And it looks good, really! And the story is interesting, so it's nice to get some more there, too. Can't wait to see the next page after this one.
Question, though: Where was the email newsletter thing this time!? I just happened to be checking in and saw this, since you said something new might be posted soon.
-Clayton
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